That sounds delightful, and I totally feel you with wishing that the listener could be the one in power :3c However, dialogue is my weak point when it comes to writing and I have a ton of WIPs to be working on already.
If someone volunteered to voice said hypothetical CD, though… I’d probably do it. I have no self control when it comes to starting new projects, and it’s ridiculously easy to tempt me with this stuff… :`D
A mix of both. Desktop only for writing requests, though, because I don’t trust mobile with ANYTHING.
Precious darling baby who deserves NONE of what happens to her. Too good for every one of the boys, and should be well and happy always. She’s not exactly my type, and doesn’t stand out to me as a favorite character, but I appreciate her for who she is! 😀 She does her best, and there’s no reason to pick on her for the shit she has to put up with.
Honestly, though, my type of anime woman is unapologetically rotten, vicious, self-absorbed, and awful in every conceivable way… my type is Cordelia, I’m afraid (*~▽~)
When I was 14, I read a review of it in the only anime magazine that was at Walmart in my home town. The line that stood out to me was something about the boys all being awful and messed up, but having interesting reasons for it, and when the manga popped up on my internet journey later, I gave it a try!
Also, fun fact; one of my first impressions was that Laito was the worst. I spent a good couple months just wanting to hit him for calling Yui “Bitch-chan”.
Well, first of all, to at least some degree, OOC is in the eye of the person writing/reading. I’m not a fan of picking on people’s writing, and if someone tells you that your writing is OOC in a non-helpfully-constructive way, please do me a favor and kindly tell them to shut the fuck up.
But! If it’s your own writing your worried about, my best tip is to just think about the character a lot. Seriously. That’s how I do it. When I’m planning to write for someone I’m not used to, I read their wiki page, check out other people’s fic, and do a whole lot of thinking/daydreaming about the character and how they would behave in the situation I plan to put them in. Just giving your idea time to settle properly can make a huge difference, so my advice would be to take it slow, and really get a feel for who you’re writing.
My other advice, though, is to not be afraid to do things your way. The main rule I always follow is that “it’s only canon if I like it”, and honestly, I’m way happier writing that way.
Fanfiction is a world of possibility, and a lot is possible if you’re willing to work a character into a situation. Take Sub Au for example. It’s… really out of character for the canon DL boys, but it works because I’ve written the characters into a place where it’s feasible. And it really works because I love what I’m writing, and I’m inspired to make it good.
So! Final advice is to have fun and try not to worry too much. Get into your character’s head, but don’t get so caught up in making them IC that you lose the fun part of writing. You can write whatever you want. No one is obligated to like it, but if you had a good time making it, it’s good fic.
Also, no idea how many people are interested, but I’m always up to giving writing advice!! 😀 Questions like this will literally never bother me.
Yep!! I love the Pet Au, and I am absolutely never letting it go~ :3c
10. Bruises
And I enjoyed writing it, anon~ >:Dc Again, I feel like this is something that I could go into a lot more depth on, and someday, maybe I’ll do a full length something explaining the nuances behind Reiji’s thought process here…
Ah well. For now, this is just vaguely nsfw bonding time for him and Reader. ^^
Warnings for corporal punishment, obviously, as well as implied child abuse and other DL typical nastiness.
“Hold still, now. We’re going to do ten this time, alright?”
“Understood.” Reiji’s voice doesn’t shake a bit, even as he’s bent over his own bed, about to be beaten. You’re the one who feels unsure.
Even so, you swing the belt just like he showed you, wincing only a little bit at the crack of leather on bare skin, the sight of red blossoming under where your hit had landed. Reiji had insisted that he wanted this, wanted the pain, and you’re determined to do what he needs.
“One.” You’re going to go slow. Not only because you need it, but because you’re well aware that the anticipation will get under his skin.
The next two strikes land in quick succession, and you catch the first whisper of a flinch from Reiji. Vampire resilience or not, you’re hitting with as much strength as you can muster, and it has to hurt.
The skin of his thighs is already going a dark, bruised looking red. You swallow your worry, and count off both hits, just as you agreed.
Reiji takes number four with the same poise, only slightly tensing under the pain. You bite your lip. He had insisted that he wanted this to hurt. For number five, you put even more power into the strike, and are rewarded with a sweet little yelp escaping from his throat. That’s more like it, you think, and count off those two strikes as well.
Six lands directly on top of a previous hit, and you force yourself to ignore the trickle of blood that oozes from the broken skin that results. Reiji has a safeword for a reason. He can stop this at any time.
“Six.” You don’t miss the way he shivers at your stern tone.
Seven leaves another red, angry bruise behind, staining the pale skin of Reiji’s thighs with crimson. You’re hitting more than hard enough to do real damage to a human, but the most response you get is another yelp.
Eight draws out a third little sound, this time coupled with a short, gasping breath. Reiji ducks his head and shakes, but you don’t falter.
“You’re doing good, you know,” you say, right before landing the next strike, the strongest one yet, and Reiji actually moans. It’s the most reaction you’ve gotten out of him, and you dare a smile. It’s not so bad, when you can tell that he’s enjoying it like this.
The final strike lands across the sensitive curve of Reiji’s thighs with a resounding snap. As soon as “ten” leaves your mouth, Reiji goes limp.
You’re sitting on the bed next to him in an instant, rubbing his back and running fingers through his hair. His thighs are a mess of blood and fresh bruises, and despite the way that he’s shivering almost painfully, the way he looks up at you is nothing short of worshipful.
The most you know about Reiji’s… interest in being beaten is that it was a common occurrence in his childhood, that the closest to affection his mother ever treated him with was after beating him bloody.
This, you think, is a much better way to fill that need.
( ●｀▽´● ) Since this would have gotten long otherwise, I went with just the “kill anyone else” type!
Shuu:
-It’s amusing that you’re so obsessed with him, and he doesn’t really do anything to stop you. Prey that practically throws itself at his feet means that he has to do a lot less work, after all. The obsession is entirely one-sided, though, and he does nothing to get any closer to you.
Reiji:
-That kind of behavior is far from proper, and he’ll put a stop to it early. You should be firmly under his control, not striking off on your own to do whatever you please, and he wont put up with your disobedience. The killing doesn’t bother him so much as the fact that you’re acting on your own.
Ayato:
-He thinks it’s more funny than anything at first, especially if he gets to see you do something violent. He will get mildly creeped out once the behavior doesn’t stop, but so long as you make sure he feels like it’s only because you think so highly of him, there’s a good chance he’ll let it continue.
Kanato:
-While he is against the idea of you doing anything on your own, that kind of obsession is exactly the thing he’d interpret as love. Your relationship will become one that feeds off of each other, and, likely, both his and your violent tendencies will only increase as they please the other.
Laito:
-Well, killing is a vampire’s way of showing love… He’s pleased that you’re so passionate about him, and, as long as you entertain him with your actions, will encourage them. He’s likely to find ways to manipulate you even further, twisting your violent tendencies in a way that benefits him.
Subaru:
-Despite how violent he tends to be, he doesn’t like you being so vicious. It’s amusing for a little bit, but gets old quick, and he’ll try to force you to stop if you don’t take the hint. He wouldn’t have expected a human to be so violent in the first place, especially not over someone like him
Ruki:
-He doesn’t appreciate you acting on your own, especially not in a way that will cause him so much trouble, and attempts to correct the behavior as quickly as possible. He won’t tolerate you acting out, and, even though the specifics of what you’re doing don’t bother him too much, the initiative does.
Kou:
-He wouldn’t care too much, if it wasn’t for his life as an idol. If anything like that gets out, it would be bad for his career, so you can’t be allowed to do those things. He wouldn’t care about the killing other than that, though, and might even find a way to manipulate you through it.
Yuuma:
-He actually finds it pretty funny that you’re willing to go to such lengths for him, and doesn’t have any problems with your killing. As long as you’re still properly his prey, it doesn’t hurt him if you get a little violent. And anyway, your dedication to someone who’s done nothing but hurt you.
Azusa:
-As one would expect, he’s nothing but pleased that you care about him so much. The only part of what you do that really bothers him is that you could be hurting him instead. He doesn’t see any problem with you killing other people to please him, and actually takes it as a sign of affection.
Carla:
-Again, you acting on your own is the biggest problem he has with the situation. It’s not becoming of his partner for you to do such things, and he’ll be against your killing if only because it would reflect badly upon him. He’ll have a harsh punishment waiting if you do anything that displeases him, of course.
Shin:
-He actually finds the killing to be pretty amusing, and allows you to get away with it so long as you don’t cause him any problems. As violent as he is, he has little problem with you hurting people, and actually might be amused that you’re willing to go to such lengths for his sake.
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Shuu:
-He’s displeased that he has to get up and move, but doesn’t bother arguing with you. He’s a little bitter about being made to kneel, but, and he’d never admit this, it doesn’t feel too bad to be at your feet.
Reiji:
-He’s somewhere between furious and humiliated that you want him to do something like that, but if he has no choice, will comply. He’ll probably try to find some way to take control of the situation even then.
Ayato:
-He argues and pouts about it for a good few minutes, but will eventually comply. He’s bratty even once he’s kneeling, trying to find some way to insult you for making him do something so embarrassing.
Kanato:
-How dare you treat him like this! Expect a shouting fit and some tears, before he finally gives up and complies. Once he’s on his knees, though, you might notice that he seems to be a little bit flustered…
Laito:
-It barely even has to be said that he’s going to make something sexual out of it. Teasing you about exactly why you’d want him to do something like that is how he keeps control of the situation, if even a little bit
Subaru:
-From the very suggestion, he goes painfully red. It’s downright humiliating to be on his knees in front of you, and even if… that’s… not entirely a bad feeling, there’s no way he’d ever want you to know that.
Azusa:
-While a bit confused as to why you’d want him to, he’ll happily do almost anything you ask of him. However, there’s a good chance he’ll interpret the kneeling as a sign that you’re about to do something to hurt him.
Since it’s October, it’s time for me to start planning for NaNoWriMo! 😀 I think I’m going to attempt an original story again this year, but… I have a LOT of potential things I could write and I have no idea how I’m going to decide which one to write. Thus, I would very much appreciate some questions/encouragement on the subject, particularly in deciding which of my stories I could go with. Expect a post explaining my potential choices soon, unless someone asks about them first. :3c
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